Uniquely Written and a Superb Poem. Strangely, I actually felt this way last week, very lonely and isolated like this poem is describing. Great Work Here!

5.5**
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We all feal disconnected from time to time. You have to ask did you disconnect yourself or did society make you feel this way.

There are other times when we wish we could disconnect ourselves from reality. Kind of a catch 22 if you ask me.

If you do ever obtain the level of Zen, please let me know and lead me there.

--Sher

I always look deeper to the poem.. and this poem, is a combiantion of simplicity and a direct poem but i'm looking for more, broader imagination and idea. yeah the emotion we're so there most specially to a person who feels so secluded, u hit it right! .. but i agree to sherry either you choose it or someone made u feel this way but either way u must try not to be affected by such 'coz ur not really alone... keep it up

A short but sweet write 4/5