Wow nice with the rhyming! mood and argue!! that was awesome! good job brooke!!

WHOA is all I can really say about this...

Im so sensative;take everything to heart
But you put the key in the ignition and put your foot on the gas to start

This was SO BEAUTIFUL and whoa again!

However in the last line did you mean to put 'ones' or did you eman 'one'? I couldn't tell but I tihnk that 'one' would fit a little better! Great poem! 5/5

Great job this 1 just screamed out at me. good job.5/5 rock on!!