This poem was very good, it made me want more! lol...I read it a couple times actually, great write!

Brooke<3

Amazing.. damn. It's great, keep working. 5/5 !!

SemberArdens

Wow, this poem is amazing. I can't stop reading it. My favorite line is 'she will sacrafice her heart, just to see if it will race.' <3 Your an amazing writer, I can't wait to read more! Keep it Up! :D