Tree planes...i think you meant three ^^ at some parts this felt more like a story to me...but at the same time it was heart breaking to read and elegantly written.

Very heart-breaking to see life being darted from place to place by planes crashing and etc. I love this poem and it is on my favourite poems list now. This shows how much life is not treated carefully-the simple contrast of emotion is very sad- and i do believe many people can grieve over these huge accidents-if not accidents at all. You have my vote definitely.

5/5
Chinwe