Dancing lights

by my demons   Sep 14, 2007


I see light dancing
ripples and lines above me
my body engulfed by black
fire filling my lungs
A hand breaks the mocking dancing light
The angel pulls on my soul
and all fades away.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Oracle

    Probably strange that i would write this, but i felt a bit of joy out of this. i know it's sad, but it feels like it could have almost been bliss. i loved it. in a strange way, it can be considered both. nice word choice. actually made the picture much more clearer.