Comments : Undying Day

  • 17 years ago

    by Sapphire

    I really like this poem,because it shows how much you can love a person.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarahh

    So much emotion, i liked it
    5/5
    must be a strong love..

  • 16 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    Nice poem great choice of words
    u'll find the right person
    keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy Wells

    And the day that I find, that salty tear
    Is the day that ill stop, wishing you were here,
    Those lines were brilliant great poem hun it made me cry very heartfelt well done 5/5 d xx