Don't Know What I'd Do (Triolet)

by Jenni Marie   Sep 14, 2007


Really don't know what I'd do
If you were to take of and leave
Only know that I'd be so blue
Really don't know what I'd do
For the only one I can love is you
If you left I'd find it hard to breathe
Really don't know what I'd do
If you were to take of and leave

Triolet-Consists of 8lines.
The 1st, 4th and 7th repeat.
The 2nd and 8th repeat as well.
Rhyme scheme is abaaabab

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  • 17 years ago

    by Magaidh

    I love Triolets.
    But I don't know what it is, but there's something missing...4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Oh jenni i really like htis poem...i enjoy reading this style...and you are so good writingin this style.
    flow was excellent and the rhymes were not forced.

    jus one thingfor this line...

    If you were to take of and leave

    i think you may have meant

    If you were to take off and leave

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