Oh jenni i really like htis poem...i enjoy reading this style...and you are so good writingin this style.
flow was excellent and the rhymes were not forced.

jus one thingfor this line...

If you were to take of and leave

i think you may have meant

If you were to take off and leave

I love Triolets.
But I don't know what it is, but there's something missing...4/5