Yeah a great poem from a great poet .u r going into my favorites.

I found this to vbe like some sort of wake, a loss where a girl has come to see a spirit. Am i right?

I really got glued to this it was more gripping than the first part i thought still exellent as always xxx alex xxx

Wow I must admit I liked this poem a lot more than the first one you wrote. This one I thought was filled more with the metaphors and the strong hold that I feel real poems are made out of. I'mnot sure if I read this right but I took it to mean something a little different. The little girl in the first poem fell asleep in the graveyard and her father came to visit her in her dreams, to help comfort her so she is able to get over his death easier. In her dream the family was at the dining room table together again for the last time, and it helped her cope with her loss. Nice work. I'm not sure if I understood it like you meant us to but that's what I got out of it. 5/5