Comments : ETERNAL DARKNESS prt 1

  • 17 years ago

    by cassanova

    Such a great poem i can relate so much that reading it made me sad

    My broken heart was dieing
    But it couldn't let you go
    So i put up with your cruelness
    Taking blow after blow

    i know how that feels

  • Oh sweety....i'm sorry...like i told you guys can be so mean sometimes...
    Loved this poem, the pain he caused you captured it so well. and the rhythm and flow was flawless!
    You deserve a High 5!!

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*