The repeated line is very powerful in this poem. I've done that before as well. It really worked out for you. It's short but hey it didn't give you a lot of time to mess up. Not your best but it still has a message that got to me. 4.

Not bad but I've seen better. you should read my poem that has a repeated line in it. It might help. It's called forbidden. completely different subject, but yet very similar......