I love tht poem babe its really good, i can relate 2 tht alot. hope ur ok, if u ever need 2 tlk im here, add me on msn if uve got it lonely_heart_2007@hotmail.co.uk
take care x x x

When hiding depression it really IS like wearing a mask... 5/5 keep it real

Nice piece! Loved the repetition and the abab rhyming of it all. You've got talent and I look forward to reading more of your work!
Charisma*

Sad, yet very nice.

Great job!!!

5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Good poem, the last stanza was a bit forced though dont you think...

good job overall like the idea of the mask to hide emotion

This poem gave me chills because it was so wonderful. Fantastic job! The poem made perfect sense, you didn't lose me one time. Though it was short, it was great! 5/5 <3 <3

~Kayla~

In the secondstanza you say you wear a mask sometime so that no one will EVER know. that does not match well.
and the last two lines are unnecesarily adjusted.

i will give 4/5 though this poem dint appeal much but keep writing:-). we all are learners