Comments : Equality

  • 17 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    Once agian i think that this was nicely done.. my fav. lines were

    "balanced, no superiority
    having a right to choose
    all born with dignity
    having the same purpose"

    i think that just that speaks so much. i really enjoys reading your poems.... Keep writing... you are amzing

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This feels kind of dark, but it still works very much! I like it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought this was another great poem by you, it just portrays the equality and the inequiality, nice job

    "balanced, no superiority
    having a right to choose
    all born with dignity
    having the same purpose"

    favorite part ^^

    and also this poem is to good for someone to leave a oneline r like the person ahead of me

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I see now that you have developed a style
    This poem does describe equality well and I like your style

  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I thought it was okay. When I read it, it didn't seem to flow very well. 3.