I Love It!! Simply Inspirational!

5.5**
<3

Beautifully written. loved it! and I totally understand what it feels like because I am a believer... amazing poem. great job!

Excellent!

i like your ideas..the concept and the words you use..the entire thing to be exact..

"Forgive us lord we know not what we do
When we do anything that offends you"

Great i love this lines..
This one deserved 5

keep it up!