Well written poem you have here. Very smooth, its like it comes to you very easily. It flowed very well and I can sense the sadness in it as well. Excellent piece, well done!

I noticed one typo in this piece. Realising is actually Realizing. Other than that. I enjoyed this piece. The first stanza was the best. Um...your parentheses in the last stanza were out of place by accident. Um...not much else I noticed to say. Good job!
Charisma*