Rly strong words and i think u said wat alot of us feel.

.:Katelyn:.

Excellent!

i can feel the emotions running through my head, it was very emotional, well concept and very descriptive!

keep it up!

"I'm sorry for what my past says
And what the present still sees
But I promise I'm trying harder
That's why I'm on bended knees. "

Holy effing MOLY. Honestly, how do you do it? LOl. The emotion in this piece is so strong, as is the wording, the flow, and the imagery. I love your work, every last poem from you is something new and amazing.

5.5
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This was a very desperate poem and you conveyed that emotion very well. Your flow was spot on (as far as I could tell) and the message was clear. Not one of my favs just because it's not as imaginative as what I like from you but still required a lot of talent. Keep it up! :)
~Midnight Sun