by Baby Rainbow
Very powerful. i like it. deep emotion xx well done xx |
I think this is one of the first poems that I have read from you that isn`t inspirational..but you did such a great job on it even so and it was nice to see you expand your talent and show it off...it`s a great talent and it`s good to see you embracing it, great job. |
I'm not always a huge fan of poems that are written all in one big stanza. It's just a personal preference of mine, but yeah. I still liked this, though. The questions throughout were a nice added touch. |
by 4 track demo
I really enjoyed this, a bunch...passionate and unrestrained, created crisp visuals, which i adore.....so, well done...5 for sure.,. |