by Baby Rainbow
I like that poem, i liek the line I used to cry, but what's the point in the tears? well done xx |
Your poems make me so frustrated at boys lol. They`re so oblivious, I say: we go on a mission to find a good one. Ha, wonder how long that would take, eh? LOL. Great poem Darling, really. |
by Midnight Sun
Wow! This was extremely powerful! I LOVE the phrase "I've lost my touch" . I don't know why it struck me so hard or why it stood out so much but it was an excellent piece, Charisma! :) And I love the feel of helplessness. Cause no matter how badly this woman wants their love to still be alive, she can't do anything without his cooperation. Amazing job...5/5 as always! :) |
by Becca
I definitely know what that's like. Great job and wonderful emotion. |