by Miu
Aww that last bit made me smile :) Really like reading just simple poems that just ryhmed great and are so cute that way:) Enjoyed it! 5/5 |
by Sherry Lynn
As long as this was written in good fun my dear... it flowed very well and has a great sense of arrogance about it. |
by Shauna
Lol, cute.. the flow is nice.. great poem girl! |
by Veamm
Excellent! |
Ha ha ha, very cool, nicely done {2 thumbs up} 5/5 |
by michael
I know what u mean by being board but i still think its a very good poem!! |
That's sort of mean, but it rhymed vell!! |
by darkenlight1
I don't know what I think about it |
by ash
This is interresting |
Very good poem. it was quick and to the point. flowed nicely. i rate this a 5. keep up the good work!!! |
Lol. made me laugh! starts out kinda serious... but ends up more lighthearted! |
Good poem. I hope you're not this arrogant :P. It wasn't that funny but the ending made me smile. The flow was off a bit but I like how you structured it. |
Haha. |
by Jenni Marie
Hahaha i love this. i liked how it started somewhat serious and them became light hearted as you got into the poem. good flow throughout and the ending made me giggle. |
HAHA. Made me smile. =) It's nice, and is probably true for some people (Hopefully not you. JK) Anyway, great job, and the flow is good too.) |
by bella
Cute! |
by Jstuckie
Nice poem i enjoyed it |
by Jstuckie
W0W THiS iS G00D |
by Hermosa
Good job...very funny |
by AmberKaz
Lmfao!! Prep much? xD Nah, awesome poem it made me smile. Thanks. =] |