We'll Never Know (You and Me) [Lyrics]

by aDORKable x3   Sep 14, 2007


Verse 1:
You tied me up with a string, just to keep me holding on,
You spun such lies and sugar-coated life, but I knew all along.
I played your game, but I held the ace, and look at who has won -
So continue to think you have the royal flush, I'll be having the fun.
The web of lies you decided to spin are oh, so intricate,
And I don't think you'll ever come clean; I don't think you'll ever admit.
Give up, you lose, pack up and go home -
'Cause if I must be lonely, I'd much rather be alone.
You thought that Id' be different, but how right, you did not know;
I hid my heart up my sleave, where no one dared to go.

Chorus:
We'll never know what we could've been -
Now I've learned how, how not to give in.
You'll never show someone all you can be.
I guess we'll never know about, you and me.

Verse 2:
Dangling, I spun, but I did it just for fun -
You didn't know all along that I was already done.
No more holding onto hopes and to empty dreams,
Because my life is so much more than it seems.
Cliches are just that; broken hearts aren't for me -
I can do better and be all I can be.
Someone will love me for just who I am;
Someone will care and they will understand.
But for now, I'll leave you with just one thought:
Don't let me be the one that you somehow forgot.

Chorus:
We'll never know what we could've been -
Now I've learned how, how not to give in.
You'll never show someone all you can be.
I guess we'll never know about, you and me.

Bridge:
Broken-down hearts in need of something more -
Gradually learning it's too much to just ignore.

Chorus:
We'll never know what we could've been -
Now I've learned how, how not to give in.
You'll never show someone all you can be.
I guess we'll never know about, you and me.

We'll never know what we could've been -
Now I've learned how, how not to give in.
You'll never show someone all you can be.
I guess we'll never know about, you and me.

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We'll Never Know (You and Me) [Lyrics]
By:Ciao
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I LOVE these lyrics, they`re amazing, but else can I expect from you? The imagery is perfect and the wording that tied it in together really did a good job at doing so. Keep it up Darling, :]
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Each multiplied by 10 to make it out of 100

Content - 9.5/10 ; 95%
Spelling & Grammar - 9.6/10 ; 96%
Appeal - 9.8/10 ; 98%
Flow - 9.6/10 ; 96%

Second Place :]

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  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    You already know that I love this to pieces, as anyone who reads it probably does. The imagery in this was amazing and the words flow together so well. You wrote this so peronally, but kept it that it could allow the reader to relate to it as well. Love it. :]

    5.5
    :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    honestly i also compose song for my band..well this one is great..the words are full of emotions on it, and every lines lingers a feeling to the reader!

    keep it up!

    i love your style!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Wow,I really liked this lyrics
    It would be a really great song if put true music in it
    I especially liked;

    We'll never know what we could've been -
    Now I've learned how, how not to give in.
    You'll never show someone all you can be.
    I guess we'll never know about, you and me.

    Keep it up Queen Ciao ;)
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    WOW!!!!!! This was amazing!
    My fav line was, "'Cause if I must be lonely, I'd much rather be alone."

    My only suggestion was to take out the word 'just' in this line

    Gradually learning it's too much to just ignore.

    because it helps the flow. Just a suggestion.
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Shauna

    Oooh I love how the verses are intertwined very skillfully.. superb work!!

    5.5**
    <33