by firexdancer Sep 15, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Sparkles of a melody in my mind |
by Teria
GASDGLKAJSDGLK. |
by Crystal Gaze
Unique and Penned Beautifully. |
by Nix
So emotional and deep. Very original idea for poem and you wrote it excellently. I don't like just on line in whole piece, and that is a fourth line in first stanza it somehow doesn't fir. Rest of this poem is fantastic, you entwined superb imagery with amazingly described feelings. Well done! |
by Veamm
Excellent! |