Excellent!

Great usage of words, well penned..

keep it up!

So emotional and deep. Very original idea for poem and you wrote it excellently. I don't like just on line in whole piece, and that is a fourth line in first stanza it somehow doesn't fir. Rest of this poem is fantastic, you entwined superb imagery with amazingly described feelings. Well done!

Unique and Penned Beautifully.

This poem was deep and very powerful. You described the feelings excellently. And used very descriptive words.

Keep it up.
--Elly.

GASDGLKAJSDGLK.

No lie, it's flawless.
I absolutely love it.
It's like perfect.
NominationANDfavoritepoems. (: