Excellent!

Nicely done, well penned!

keep it up!

Very good. i know how u feel...been there. keep it up!!! 5/5

First of all the title is misspelled. Just thought you'd like to know.

"the knife whispers lies to me
"I'll help you end the pain"
but at the time i was too blind to see
this knife is the reason I'm going insane"

the end was a bit long. maybe shorten it
eg.

"the knife whispers lies to me
I'll help you end the pain
But at the time I was to blind to see
That the knife made me insane"

or something like that.
You dont have to change it I'm just throwing it out there.

I really enjoyed the poem though and well done!

^_^

xx