Hey ilike this
ilike the mud part espeacially
and
yet stories unrevealed
mistaken information
truths still concealed

actually i really like the whole thing:)

I love the form! Great writing and use of words and style! Good Work!

5.5**
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And Thank You for your comment =)

I thought it was very good, the rhyming was good and the flow of the poem was natural, and your wording and the kind of emotion attached to this poem is very good, a well deserved 5/5

Wowwys
i like!!

Wow...is all i can say..truth is truelly a powerful thing..it can bring happiness and love but it can also bring a whole nation down aswell!!....gr8 poem...keep up the gr8 writes
tk care
breex

Very open views on secrets I like your choice of words very nice flow

Wow this was short, but it said so much in just a few words! You did a great job! I enjoyed reading it! I also liked the rhyming in it! 5/5

~Kristina

Ohhh, It may have been a short poem but it all is just so prefectly fixed together ^^ keep up the good work lol xxxx Roxy