So nice
Loved it
5/5
keep it up

This Haiku seems to be astronomically profound. The colloquial wording enhances this style of poetry.
I believe this Haiku could be interpreted many ways. The endless sparkle is a paradoxical illusion that we may only observe in the earths shadow. The stars that are personified in a metaphorical competition are huge heavenly bodies of varying distances, yet the moon seems more fabulous because of our closeness to it. The day can be twenty-four hours yet is perceived as the opposite of night. When we are blinded by the light of the star that is our sun is impossible the view all points of light as we vainly perceive our tiny planet as the center of the universe all night, all day long

I usually don't like nature poems, but this one I really enjoyed! it was beautiful. I got images and I really like it. You packed a lot of power into a little poem dear.
Great job!
5.5
<3
Ciao

Aww. i Dnt know the haiku poems meaning. But it seems me a nice poem 5/5

Well done Laura:)
Im never disapointed in your work, your effort is always at its top.
A vey beautiful and metaphoric haiku.

5/5 for a job well done.
-- Elly.

I usually don't like short poems but I love this style. Haikus are brilliant. In such few words you've been able to say so much. I loved the imagery in this and it flowed really well. 5/5

Take Care!

-Shannon <3

Wow this haiku is very good. i really like it a lot. it was really great. i like what it was about. 5/5

~Kristina

That was great i loved it very expressive.

Cory

First of all, the title is brillant. Original and leaves readers wondering what the poem's about. Anyway, great job, managing to be very descriptive in such a short piece.
Keep it up 5/5
~ Lainey

Excellent!

honestly i don't have any idea in haiku type of poetry, but i think this one expressed well, its topic!

keep it up!

I liked this haiku it was unique 5/5

Beautifully written Haiku, very original and you created great atmosphere with just few words. Imagery is also excellent. Well done!

You're right about Haiku's. Those three lines always manage to say so much
This one created such fabulous imagery for me!
It was perfect
5.5
*Gem*

It is really a gift when you are able to express yourself with very few words. You can.
Great job!

5/5 for you sweetie

Take care,

Ingrid

I havnt read a haiku, or a nature poem in a while. Youve made me realise what i love about them. *smiles*.
I think that you have so much meaning in this. Haiku's are meant to hold strong meanings but its soemtimes hard to see.
Good usage of discription - it created excellent imagery.
An amazing read - sorry for the short ocmment but i do not know what else to say. Keep writing! :)
x

Mhhh, I love Haiku's:)
Beautiful write and a lovely subject.

take care,

5/5 Ingrid

I like nature poems. And I liked this one too. Well written.