That is the doorway to his heart, the place where love resides. the caring that she lovingly gives, the passion that he shows, from the beauty of inside her." how lovely yet so heartfelt emotions you written With Kerry. one of the best collab...Marvellous!

Oh!!! My! You two really wrote a very romantic
poem with all five senses singing out so much love.
The read reminded me of good times when I lived on the beach in Carlsbad, Ca.
Excellent job well done and Write On,
Bogie

Aww this was so very sweet and aah truely romantic. Showing also very deep affection. A beautiful poem. Simpley flawless! Amazing job on this! :)
Keep writing! 5/5

I enjoyed in it. Imagery is excellent and you created powerful atmosphere. Very emotional piece, it has great rhythm, you two described every feeling superbly. It deserves 5/5

A really really nice poem Jenni. You've used lovely, descriptive words

Great collab, whole poem is excellently written, with good wording and superb atmosphere. I like the flow of the whole piece.
Every stanza has great descriptions.
Well done, 5/5 from me

WOW! I felt like i was watching you guys SORRY lol but thats a great thing. An amazing collab. I've never tried it before but now i'm considering it. thanks to the both of you for the inspiration. i hope to read more 5/5

"We've both found what we're looking for,
This fairytale we've built together,
We will last until the eternities,
Showing this fairytale love forever"

This is amazing, when you two get together, you write such amazing poetry!!!
Very romantic
5/5
*Gem*

Awesome penned Poem, Beautifully worded and a delight to read. Excellent work you Two.
Peace and Blessings

Amazing stuff, neatly organized and such great fom of expresion. love it!

I like it especially relating to zeus 5/5

I liked it, good job, you kept me throughout the whole poem

your servant:
david

Great collab...very well done. Beautiful love poem