by Michael D Nalley Sep 15, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
How may we expect to get things done, |
The last stanza is fantastic, for one thing. This piece is wonderful because it talks about the future in a very truthful way. Great job. |
by Veamm
Excellent! |
by Tricky Daze
Wow it was so truthful and reality about life...But in life things like that always happen |
This poem is very loving. i like this alot. i rate this a 5. keep up the good work |
by Pamela G
I enjoy reading your poems. Thank you for sharing. |