by BlueDreams
Have we ever really looked inside the wrapping? Perhaps we've never accepted the gift that we're? Could it be that there is something else inside than what we think? Could God's gift be anything but good? Maybe it needs polishing to bring out its value, it's natural luster! Maybe it's unique hasn't found its essential worth? Well... I've to agree with you about the last stanza; |
by Pamela G
I enjoy reading your poems. Thank you for sharing. |
This poem is very loving. i like this alot. i rate this a 5. keep up the good work |
by Tricky Daze
Wow it was so truthful and reality about life...But in life things like that always happen |
by Veamm
Excellent! |
The last stanza is fantastic, for one thing. This piece is wonderful because it talks about the future in a very truthful way. Great job. |