I'm still thinking of a title

by darkenlight1   Sep 15, 2007


This is getting old.
Doing it too long.
Make me want to stay,
help me not to go.
you can't understand
this wasn't my plan.
Just to escape for a while
would make me hapy,
but this is getting old
and I'm staying young.
How long with I be locked inside of me?
How long with I be dead?
Bring me out of this.
Get me out alive.
Promise me your day.
Promise me your life.
I can't stay awake.
I can't fall asleep.
This is making me insane.
Don't know when to cry.
Promise me a life.
Been here way too long.
Sorry to say
this ain't over.
Not today not today
Forever.
Promise me a day.
Give me a light.
To shine on me inside.
Bring me out inside of me.
Bring it out,
but don't set it free

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulGirl

    I agree with all of u. its so somooth i sounds like i can be turned into a song. 5/5 keep it up :)
    ~~jennalyn~~

  • 17 years ago

    by cory

    I agree i don't have much experience but that was really good.5/5. keep on rockin!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Another wonderful poem. I know you are new but you seem like you've been writing forever. You have a natural talent for writting and I commend you for that.
    This poem had a great flow to it as well. I liked your word choice and it was well put together. I can't wait to read more from you.
    5/5

    Take Care && Keep it up

    -Shannon <3