A very profound peace with an outstanding flow

Very effective poem, I enjoy in it. You created incredible atmosphere with so little words and rhythm of this piece is very powerful. Your wording is great, to be honest I never read this form of poetry but you truly did fantastic job. Well done! You wrote impressing piece.

I've done one of these before! Mine wasn't as good as yours though :P

This was excellent. I loved the words you used. Flowed very nicely. For your first attempt this is very good. Your a natural with this form of poetry.
Great Job! 5/5

-Shannon <3

I like this alot.. very nice job. i enjoyed reading this one very much

Wow this is really good. i never saw this type of poem before, so i like it a lot. it was well written. it must of took you long. good job! 5/5

~Kristina

Nice poem, its very brave of you that you tried something new. I think you did a good job. keep up the good work. 5/5

A very effective first attempt. This was very good for a first, and I really enjoyed it:)
I applaud you for trying a new style.
And therefore, I give you 5/5

Keep it up,
Elaine.

Brilliant! Escpecially for your first attempt!!

5.5**
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I really liked it
It was short but remaind gripping
5/5

Short but to the point. I never heard of this type of poetry before, but you did a great job. 5/5

Nice job.

Excellent!

Well honestly im not familiar with this kind of poetry..but its very descriptive..

Keep it up!

I've never seen this style before, but you mastered it beautifully...
I particularly love the ending, it was strong and intense, really wrapped the poem up and gave it a beautiful, stunning effect.

Now this a true tyburn!
A much better attempt than anything i've ever done! lol
Well done!
5/5
*gem*

Wow, so powerful and effective, whole poem is simply amazing! You said so much with so little words and created stunning atmosphere.
Truly unique poem.
5/5 from me

You style of writing is very similar to mine except better than what I could describe! 5/5

GREAT! You did a tyburn!!! very dark words, and i like that, keep it up 5/5

I really like this one :) Very strong, very powerful. Again you have a magnificent word choice. You could choose the simple words to get your point across but you choose the strong ones. Your imagination seems limitless.

Excellent

5/5

Very good, indeed.

Not only have you followed the form perfectly, but you've presented a beautiful, painful picture as well.

Wow, you're really good at this type of poetry :) this is the first time I've actually read one, well done.

Keep up the good work.