I really like this poem.

Very nice and well written poem. this is a poem many girls can relate to. written with strong feelings that touch the heart of the reader. well done. keep up the good work. 5/5

Aww, very cute! Wonderful poem and lovely writing!

5.5**
<33

Cute :)

Love it =) amazing poem/lyrics can really relate as im sure alot of other girls can too (and guys if they look at it from a guys point of view) well done keep writing.

comment any 2 of my poems thank you =D

Love
Jacs
xxxx

This is VERY cute! keep it up!

Great song. Very cliche though. But I guess most songs are. This was wonderfully written as well. The only way this could be better is if you were singing it.
Great Job 5/5

-Shannon <3

Hmm thats was a cute poem.

Awesome Poem!!

5.5**
<33

This seems really sweet. I wish I could hear it put to music. You should check out my song too?

Oh, and thank you so much for the comment on my poem.

<3
5/5

Wonderful lyrics and a beautiful poem. I'm sure many girls can relate to this one. The flow was really good too. 5/5

marcella

Great song you rock!! plz keep writing.5/5

Cory

Yeah just about everyone can connect to that. There were some grammar mistakes and in some parts you used the wong word but I got the jist of it so it's alright. I'd give it a three but since you didn't rate on the one of mine that you thought deserved a three I won't rate either.

Wow.This poem is amazing.
I think it's very sweet one. You
did such a great job with the last
part. I really enjoyed reading it.
I give this a 5/5!

Beautifully Written. Very Good. =]

Now this is something I could truly relate too. The emotion of wanting someone to be yours so badly is powerful and something I feel right now. Well done *5/5*

If I only knew that the girl I like felt this way about me, I'd be a very happy man.
Well done.
I'd like to see these lyrics sung some day.