by *Charisma* Sep 15, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Want to be the face that stops you in your tracks |
by Becca
I can relate. Great job. Once again excellent word choice. I love reading your poems. |
by Midnight Sun
Ugh, another unhappy ending to a blissful poem, lol. But still an excellent write. Penned beautifuly. But it's like a bitter-sweet thing for me cause the bliss you get in the beginning and the smile it brings to your face is like shattered by the very last line! Lol! But it was very structured and formed really well. Still a 5/5 from me :) |
by Beatrice
Omg I loved this poem...It displays your emotions and creativity...Keep writing Please. |
by Spanish Star
Oh wow. A really beautiful written poem. I loved it. Great work :) |
Excellent good job! |