Wow! Brilliant poem you have written here. I can definitely relate to this and I'm sure a lot of other people as well can. You did a really great job writing this! The flow was perfect! Keep on writing! 5/5

~Kristina

Beautifully written. It's knowing that you're someone's only one.. It's wanting to know that their eyes are only for you.. Glossy magazine covers, and photo pin-ups aren't real people, they're the image of every person that we all wish we were, if only we'd look in the mirror, and see that we already are.. Your poem speaks with real 'Let me just be me' understanding. I'm glad I read this.. I'm sure it's the way most of us think, and you have conveyed that really well. Well done. xx

LOVE this, so many girls will be able to relate to this and put themselves into the situation you are in or that you are just writing about, this is an amazing piece from you, yet again.

"But I'm not that kind of girl, so your wandering eyes say. "

^^ LOVE it. Such truth, such pain...and such a perfect ending ;]

5.5
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I love this poem,I can agree with tons of other girls that they have been in this situation!

Excellent good job!

Oh wow. A really beautiful written poem. I loved it. Great work :)

Omg I loved this poem...It displays your emotions and creativity...Keep writing Please.

Ugh, another unhappy ending to a blissful poem, lol. But still an excellent write. Penned beautifuly. But it's like a bitter-sweet thing for me cause the bliss you get in the beginning and the smile it brings to your face is like shattered by the very last line! Lol! But it was very structured and formed really well. Still a 5/5 from me :)
~Midnight Sun

I can relate. Great job. Once again excellent word choice. I love reading your poems.