by Jenna Sep 15, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Your life has been a living hell |
by Kaila
Very nice |
by Crystal Gaze
Your best yet! Penned Marvelously. |
This poem was okay. I think you can do matter. It lacked a lot of emotion. I think you should struture it better too. Have the same amount of lines in each stanza. Also have the first letter in each line capitalized. All that I said would really improve your writing. |
by Shauna
Lovely! |