Your Hell, I Love You

by Jenna   Sep 15, 2007


Your life has been a living hell
from what you've told me.
You were hurt by someone,
when you were young, you didn't know it was wrong.

Trust from you
never came,
always angry, hated everyone who came near.
never told a single person
that you loved them,
not even your own mother.

You lost someone so close, a father figure,
someone you looked up to.
You think about him all the time,
i can tell that when you talk about him.

June 4th you say was the best day of your life,
got the courage to ask me out.
never knew it would come this far,
but look at us my darling.

You tell me I'm the best thing in your life,
I'm the half that makes you whole
you'll love me forever till death do us part.

i know you have gone through so much,
the many thoughts that you've had,
have also gone through my head.
you tell me i deserve much better,
someone who wont hurt me,
but baby, i love you with all my heart,
even if you've been through hell,
I'm here to take your hand, and save you from yourself.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very nice
    again
    i like the idea
    but the structures off
    and i feel like im reading
    idn a story
    but a good one
    nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Your best yet! Penned Marvelously.
    I really enjoyed this, the emotion's seemed real, the didn't read forced, and the flow was beautiful.

    5/5:D
    --Elly.

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    This poem was okay. I think you can do matter. It lacked a lot of emotion. I think you should struture it better too. Have the same amount of lines in each stanza. Also have the first letter in each line capitalized. All that I said would really improve your writing.

    -Shannon <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Shauna

    Lovely!

    5.5**
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