Shattered Remembrance

by Catastrophic Beauty   Sep 15, 2007


His broken reflection,
A withered soul,
Lost in a memory.

He speaks of silence,
A manipulated tongue,
One breath off insanity.

His head bowed down,
A faithful servant,
Needing sympathy.

His tainted heart,
A desolate entity,
Killing him slowly.

His torpid body,
An apathetic man,
Gone for eternity.

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Thanks Shauna for the title =)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    Very good, dark to me ^^ but good. Short but to the point. Best one I read all day so far ^^ 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by bethany

    I was slightly confused. im a little embarresed to say it though. :P. anyway, it was still really great. keep writing. you seem like a cool person. id like to get to know you. haha not in a creepy way, but just on this website lol. oops.

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Very short poem and to the point, I thought the word choice was once again perfect and the flow was as well. Fantastic job again 5/5 GG23 P.S. sorry it took a few days to get back to you - Take Care

  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    I love your strong vocabulary on this piece. the title how ever confuses me a bit.
    5

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Heyy this was really good. i liked the words used and the structure. very powerful keep it up xx

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