Teddy bear.

by Miu   Sep 15, 2007


Teddy bear laying on ground,
years gathering the dust around.
He never closed his eyes, never screamed.
His eyes never displayed tears.

A lonely soul, inside him lays.
The knowledge of him has faded into forgotten days.
But he remembers cute hugs, goodnight kisses.
It's everything he really misses.

Head halfway ripped off, white color turned black.
Feelings of love are being in lack.
And laying there, no complaints, no fears.
A single sound of warmth still echos in his ears.

Sunshine, rain and the coldest days.
Been through all, no word he says.
Memories that lay in his heart,
They will always stay, make him smile, and everything o kay.

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  • 14 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww... wow! i'm so touched! this poem is beautiful! I love it! It is very well-written... so sad but wonderfully expressed... I loved how the title was Teddy Bear because that can be a special item to a person and I really loved the ending.. it was beautiful!

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina

    I rele felt the emotion of the teddy bear lol and i rele liiked how it was written!!! good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by ali

    This is soo cute and sad...i feel so bad for the poor teddy, seeing and feeling everything but never being able to tell anyone...aww i'm gonna start crying now...
    beautiful, excellent and really emotive poem
    awesome stuff!!!
    5/5
    - ali x x x x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by unblue skye

    Oh my god! such a wonderful poem! So sad-yet happy cuz of memories........ wow... great job-5/5 it touched me so well-if my dad read this he'd think the same. i'll make a big deal out of the good stuff in life from now on ;D

    ~'*'~Skye~'*'~

  • 17 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Aww, I really loved this poem. You did a really good job on it. I guess that's how my Tiggers' feel right about now. Great job. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

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