Hey. This seems like it should be in the love category. |
This seems as though it would fit in the love category, though I can see why you placed it here ... Anyhow. Swell poem. The flow was a bit rocky to me, but it oozed emotion, gratitude, and hope. Overall, a pleasure to read. |
by Pamela G
Very well done in rhyming. I'm enjoy reading your peoms. |
This poem is full of emotions and your word choice was great. the flow was flawless. and the imagery was fantastic. i dont really have a favorite stanza, but the ending was well put in. a great write. 5/5. |
by Sumit Ojha
Little long... But interesting... I give you 4/5 |