by Saravana Kumar S May 2, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Love,a word of just 4 letters, |
by lawrence
wow Kumar! you've progressed much in your works! how well you've covered all the different aspects of love in this poem. yet in every line, in all the ways love make us feel, there's always an underlying risk of hurt and pain isn't it? yet we still constantly crave for it, just as u said in the last lines "still, in love we all fall... still hope of the other side of the mountain... happiness that flows like a fountain". great work! |
GREAT poem! Love is so many things... and you hit on them all! I loved it! |