by luv Shelbz luv Sep 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You were the smile |
by Chelsey
I loved this poem. |
Good poem. Most of it was excellent but not the last stanza. It seems a bit rushed. The structure was jumbled because you added one extra line to that stanza which messed up the flow. |
by Syndicate
I don't know what to say except that I love this poem! :D 5/5 *adds to favs* |