Good poem. Wonderfully written. I loved the twist in it. How you went from hate to love. I've felt like this before. This poem flow was flawless and it is well put together.
Good Job. 5/5

-Shannon <3

You did a great job, especially the way you described your feelings! keep it up!

Nice idea. Love how you made the switch from hate to love. The flow was on key and it was nicely written. Powerful feeling.

U cant hate the one u love

hate is not something u should even do espeacailly to the one u "love"

so how can u say i cant bc i hate u if b4 u said i love u

Doesn't it just suck when the one you love is also the one that you hate?
Like when the person that your in love with is just so mean and has hurt you so many times?
I do!
I completely despise it.
=]
anyways.
It was a good poem.. it definitely showed how you were feeling.

xoxo
--CHelsey