This poem is very deep and that's what I like about it. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it, so that makes this poem excellent! It also flowed really nicely. Please keep on writing, you have talent! 5/5

~Kristina

Wow, I loved the description---it was very vivid and drew a clear picture in my mind---I know there are many people who can relate to this----you expressed this wonderfully

Brooke<3