We should learn from the mistakes they made so we can live a better life. we should smile because there suffering has ended and ours continue. its a beautiful poem and speaks in many volumes. what inspired u to write it?

Aww hunny, this was amazing.
This has got to be one of your best, by far. (:

One Suggestion:
"just because there trying to save the country"
^ Change -there- to "they're". :)

Other than that, beautiful job as always.
Iloveyou! :P
--- Stephanie Lynn <3