I love your poem! theres just something about that speaks to me, its beautiful and yet so sad.

Honestly, this one made me almost cry. i had been watching something sad, so when i read this it just added more emotion to it. it does make me appreciate just how lucky some are to have people who truly care for them. and others who aren't as lucky. well, they remain forbidden, and end up like that. your poem was deep in feeling and emotion. told ya. you can write! :-)

Tht was um, ok this is gna sound corny but it was beautiful, really intense, not many ppl can put so much emotion into a couple sentences, gud job