by Twisted Heart Sep 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Smile... |
by ABake
First off, the emotion in this peice was incredible. I was so intrigued by your wording that it was amazing. Great job! Your flow was right on the dot and the peice all fit together perfectly. Once again, great job! |
Very Good, It flows nicely and sounds like it wasnt forced. :) Keep it up |