by Twisted Heart Sep 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
So many times we hurry by |
AMAZING. I am so speechless right now. I loved the rhymes in this and the flow and imagery, along with the overall message. Everything you wrote is so true, if only we weren`t all so busy, we`d have the time to stop and smell the flowers or feel sand between our toes...although a sad poem, this also really inspired me ! :] |
by *Charisma*
Good piece with a good message. I like how this didn't have a happy ending, that you too left in too much of a hurry. I enjoyed several lines from this piece. |
by amelia
Beautiful poem |