Beautiful poem

love
amy

Good piece with a good message. I like how this didn't have a happy ending, that you too left in too much of a hurry. I enjoyed several lines from this piece.
Or spend an afternoon with one
who sometimes we forget.
Or drink from falling raindrops
that cascade from the sky.
Those were both good. The first one was emotional, and the second one was a visual, almost could taste it in my mouth. Great job!
Charisma*

AMAZING. I am so speechless right now. I loved the rhymes in this and the flow and imagery, along with the overall message. Everything you wrote is so true, if only we weren`t all so busy, we`d have the time to stop and smell the flowers or feel sand between our toes...although a sad poem, this also really inspired me ! :]

5.5
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