by Twisted Heart Sep 16, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
In the absence of light, a silence grows |
As chaos crashes down to earth |
It was good very very good i liked it |
by Gabrielle
Love this poem!! VERY WELL WRITEN! 5/5 |
This is an amazing piece of work. It flowed so smoothly, and it was so full of feeling. Goose bumps raised upon my arms as I read it. The rhythm is perfect, the words beautiful. I enjoyed reading this. |
The imagery in this piece stood out so much it nearly screamed. Your flow is also another thing that I really admire in all of your poems, it has such a flawless rhythm...makes it that much easier to read and to enjoy. |