Daddy i need you

by Krysten   Sep 16, 2007


I know you are not here
Though I know you want to be
I just dont know what to do
Daddy, will you please help me
You always gave me courage
You helped me to stay strong
Ive been lost and wondering
Ever since youve been gone
tll me what to do now
Please offer a helping hand
I dont know when Ill fall
Just catch me as I land
I need to know what to do
Howe to act and be
Daddy, Im simply lost
With out you here with me
Ill be an adult soon
Out in the big wide world
No longer will I be able to say
Im daddys little girl
To soon I will be on my own
Please tell me what to do
Give me the strength you always have
Please just see me through

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  • 16 years ago

    by ourlilsecret

    Wow..
    I really liked this poem..
    It was simply awesome and sweet...
    Youh Never know when your parents will be gone but youh have to cheerish every minute of it all... =]]
    Anyways...
    Great Job... =]]
    This is One of myy Favorites Of Yours..

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    Ok...I am totally in love with this poem. Its perfect all over. Beautifully written and I liked the way that it flowed. I can relate to this poem 100%, I think that's why i like it so much. But yea, very good job on this one. Perfect =}
    5/5

    PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    This was a beautiful poem. The words were simplistic, but there was so much power and emotion that made the poem really strong. There was also a really good flow.
    Great job.
    5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful poems you penned here, though simply but you expressed them well within beautiful emotions write... i know how it feel, keep your head up high, take care.

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