I liked this one, it was unique and I liked how you made love into a game like gambling...nice write!

Brooke<3

Great poem ,well written , but sad an to be honest so true , people use love everyday and break hearts all the time. It sucks and I hate the fact myself , but I have to live with it , anyway great write ,,,, Your friend Tracy d 5/5

This is really great.
i love it.
thanks for the comment maybe you could comment "she is still his angel" as well?
but back to your poem.
i really loved the whole concept of it. love can be a game sometimes..
anyways this is incredible 5/5
keep it up.
<3jess

Dang!!! Dude! I felt like I was at work
talking to a slot machine that has broken
another man down to the streets and now
he is homeless.
Just like a good woman with great curves
bells and whistles flashing lights and lots
of money not her own, you will never
know what the score really is.
Excellent read my friend and Write On,
Bogie

Sadly I know what this is like...

I like the idea of this poem and metaphors that you used are really great. Topic is interesting and rhythm of this piece is very refreshing. You expressed emotions on a unique way which is excellent. Well done, you also created very good atmosphere. It deserves 5/5

You've got some really good lines here. My suggestion is to make the lines more uniform from verse to verse, and be more consistent with the rhythm and emphasis on the words.

Also, "riches" and "stitches" seems very forced

Oooooooooooooooooo myyyyyyyyyyyyyy goooooooooooooood this is the best poem I thnk I've read so fare witch makes me sad becouse you must have had to go throw a lot of pain to beable to right something to buttaful(sp) an yet so sad I hope you keep wrighting your brilant you could be the next robert frost
hay can i use you poem in an open mic night so ever one can see just how good you are?

Oh wow this is so original and great.
i like how you did the whole love and gambling thing
real nice and clever (Y)

5/5

xo.louiii

Oh my... Andrew! This poem was so sad and it brought tears to my eyes! The words were absolutely flawless in this poem and I loved every single line! The pain and emotion was so great in this poem.. it has to be one of your best yet, I believe! Great job!! You better keep it up =) 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Rikku~

Your poem 'gambling life' is really really good..

..... I don't even know where to start. There are alot of feelings in this poem and that is greater then any poem you could ever write. Very true, and it's 100% feeling. Nice.

<33 Nikki <33

I feel the emotion in this poem
sad. :[[

5/5.

Wow, i really liked that!!!! it was so awesome how you compared gambling to love. good job!!! :-)

OMG this poem is wel wow i mean iv been waiting 4 an amazing poem 4 a while now (not saying everyother poem on this site is not there all unique) but that was wow

Well, can't say I can relate to that, but all the same it was the truth, so I liked it.
(I'll try to comment as many poems as I can, But I'm kind of slow) :)

Wow i like this one
your poems are good man

Really good poem! love it! i felt pain and misery while reading it!
and btw.. ty for your comment!