by ABake Sep 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Finally found happiness, but it's been taken away. |
by Stephanie
Sweets, that was fabulous. :) |
I enjoy the different style approach you took in this piece. I think it has a very odd and intriguing rhythm to it. Emotive, unique, fluid, good word choice. Nicely penned! |
Very well done. Very discriptive. :) Keep writing. |
by Marc Ortiz
It was a great poem, what I like in this poem is the structure and the use of punctuations. I also think it flowed nicely, good job. |
by Veamm
Excellent! |