Satisfaction Through Your Lies.

by ABake   Sep 16, 2007


Finally found happiness, but it's been taken away.
I sit here staring at the same four walls; no thoughts.
Tears running down my face; eyes becoming dry.
Blood dripping from my broken heart; no longer beating.

Breaths becoming shorter; harder and harder to live.
Someone help me, help me mend this broken heart.
My eyes; they plead with everyone that passes by.
Yet no one looks deep enough; an unknown meaning.

Tell me it will be alright; keep feeding me your lies.
My soul is hungry; feed it with your fake words.
I lay motionless; still you watch my every breath.
I am still alive; emotionally I am dead, because of you.

I put on a fake smile, give everyone that fake laugh.
Hope no one will notice what lies beneath my lies.
No one sees the pain I feel; the tears that fall.
My broken heart; pleading to be loved.

So once again, feed me your lies; satisfy my angry soul.
I attempt to release these emotions; still trapped inside.
Once again; I lay motionless and tears they still fall.
Pleading with my words to take away pain; they don't.

I am afraid that neither will you.......

[This was a very weird write for me. It was a new style and a new outlook on my emotions and my pain. Hope everyone enjoys]

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Sweets, that was fabulous. :)
    By the way, it's good to try out new things every once in a while with your writing. The poem was magnificent. I'll be honest and say that I can relate. Beautifully written. Overall: 5.5

    --- Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    I enjoy the different style approach you took in this piece. I think it has a very odd and intriguing rhythm to it. Emotive, unique, fluid, good word choice. Nicely penned!

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 17 years ago

    by Vacant Expressions

    Very well done. Very discriptive. :) Keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a great poem, what I like in this poem is the structure and the use of punctuations. I also think it flowed nicely, good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    Nicely penned..great thoughts!

    keep it up!